Unedited film

Unedited film voice over script

• ·         My institutional logo needs to be added at the beginning of the film.
• ·         A sound track of a piano playing to be added.
• ·         The background noise needs to be taken out.
• ·         The first scene with Diane and Hermann needs to be cut at the end and cross faded into the next scene.
• ·         Film title and credits need to be added onto the panning shot of the basement, this clip needs to be sped up.
• ·         A video effect needs to be added on this and the previous scene to make it look more like a dingy basement by having a ‘poor’ quality video.
• ·         The third shot, Hermann watching a video of Diane, needs a spotlight effect on Hermann or the shot needs to be brighter to see his face clearer when he turns to the camera.
• ·         A door knock sound effect needs to be inserted just before Hermann turns around.
• ·         Sound track end when Hermann opens the door.
• ·         The scene with Hermann and the postman needs to be split and put into order and focus on the character speaking at the time, using a 180 degree rule shot.
• ·         The postman hands over the letters at different times in the two takes of the shot, the clip needs to be cut at a point where this change is not seen.
• ·         Background noise needs to go.
• ·         Sound track plays again.
• ·         The shot of Hermann walking into the kitchen needs to start later in the clip as he is looking at the camera.
• ·         In the kitchen, the camera makes a snap noise when the camera angle changes, this can be resolved by starting slightly further in the clip.